Showing posts with label Blogging Tips and Tricks. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Blogging Tips and Tricks. Show all posts

Friday, February 25, 2011

Building a New Blog!

imageAs some of you have seen already, I’m transferring the “writing” portion of this blog to The WriteRunner. I’m looking for ideas about widgets and other things to do for it. I’ve already installed a comment system called Disqus and I’m using a new-fangled template.

My tentative launch date is March 14. I’m hoping to host a contest or blogfest or something. It also will celebrate the 2nd anniversary of the beginning of my writing career. Stay tuned for details.

Another thing I’ve done is to start echoing this blog onto Open Salon. Open Salon is an amalgam of many people’s blogs, where people can vote and promote their favorite content. Check it out and let me know what you think!

As far as this blog goes, once The WriteRunner is launch, I’m going to give this blog a makeover. I’m not sure what direction it will take but I can imagine that it might become more opinionated. The original purpose of this blog was to talk about my efforts to publish Dawn’s Rise but I never finished that project.

So feel free to point out what blog features you like using. Even if it’s not a “Blogger” feature I can probably find a way to use it.

Friday, May 14, 2010

How to Host a Writer’s Blogfest

How to Host a Writer’s Blogfest

blogfestSo, you want to host a writer’s blogfest. What’s wrong with you?? Seriously, it’s a bit of work. This post describes what you need to know.

Choosing a Topic

A great topic can make or break a blogfest. Too specific, and no one enters. To obscure, and no one has anything that applies. Too general, then you’re flooded with entries and spend six days reading them all. Here are some general areas to consider (definitely not exhaustive, use your imagination):

  • Writing Skills – Dialog, description, exposition, POV, characterization, blurbs
  • Story moments – Romantic moments, challenges, ordeals, beginnings, ends, reversals, surprises, conflict
  • Characters – Good guys, bad guys, demons, angels, lovers, haters, the young, the old
  • Topical – Fighting, kissing, mentoring, self-sacrifice, sex, settings (kitchen, bar, beach are recent examples), props, drinking, cheating
  • Concepts – Specific moods, emotions, words, feelings, relationships

I would stay away from anything genre-specific like “Urban Vampire vs Zombies Blogfest.” Leave it open-ended enough that you don’t exclude tons of people. But it can be a little bit restrictive to make it challenging and fun.

One thing I did was that I created a poll asking people which blogfest they would like to see, which helped me choose the most interesting idea.

Setting a Date

So you have a great blogfest idea and can’t wait, so you make it next Tuesday. Don’t. You want to give yourself enough time to publicize your blogfest. I would suggest a minimum of a month from the time you announce it and open sign-ups.

Also, various blogs (including mine) maintain lists of upcoming blogfests. People get worn out! Try to schedule yours at least a week away from any others. You want your blogfest to be special, don’t you?

I’d also suggest avoiding early in the week when people are swamped with work. But I don’t have any empirical evidence to support this. I guess figure out a day that will allow you to spend the day reading everyone else’s entries (which as the host is part of your responsibility).

Create the “Blogfest”

You will need a way for people to “sign up” for your blogfest. Personally I don’t sign up until the day-of because
  a) I want to make sure I actually get to do it and
  b) I want to add the actual link to my entry.
But you want people to sign up right away if they want to. I’ve seen
Mr. Linky and Simply Linked be used, but I don’t love either.

When you create the announcement post, stick to the point. “Here’s my blogfest. These are my general guidelines. Here are the rules [which I’ll address below]. Here’s the sign-up form.” I’ve seen blogfests that don’t even have the word “blogfest” in their title. Then it rambles on for two pages about their kid’s rabbit before getting to the point. Lame. This is the entry that people will link to in their own blogs. Make it somewhat professional.

Creating Rules

Rules? We don’t need no stinking rules!
Yes, you do. Here are the required rules:

  1. Bloggers must sign up by or on the date of the blogfest.
  2. Their blogfest entry must link back to the signup post so people can find the other entries.

Everything else is up to you. Here are some suggestions.

  1. Word count. Encourage people to keep their entries short, because people generally shy away from long entries, no matter how good they are.
  2. Commenting. Encourage people to comment on everything they read, good or bad. Honesty helps each blogger way more than empty praise.
  3. Ask for people to help publicize the blogfest [more below]. Or demand it.
  4. Ask for followers! Don’t be shy!
  5. Encourage people to submit an entry even if it isn’t that good. The more the merrier.
  6. Blogfest-specific rules. Any words they must use? Any types of characters or specific props? A specific setting or mood?

Publicize

The best way to publicize a blogfest is by having tons of followers on your social network. This post does not cover how to accomplish that. But given your social network, here are some things to do:

  1. Create badges so people can put them on their blogs and web sites.
  2. Put links all over your blog and websites so people can’t possible miss the sign-up form.
  3. Make sure people who maintain blogfest lists (like me) are notified. A comment on their latest post is sufficient.
  4. Create a Facebook event. Tweet the event announcement. Repeatedly.
  5. Make your “announcement” post appealing and clear, with easy-to-follow rules and requirements.
  6. Participate in other blogfests, and comment on as many entries as you can. People who participate in one blogfest are likely to participate in others.
  7. Mention it whenever you can (without being annoying). Or be annoying. People will forgive you. (please forgive me).
  8. Guest blog, write a series of posts about your blogfest topic, send out invitations, whatever floats your boat.
  9. Rewards! Turn your blogfest into a contest or sweepstakes, where you either choose the best entries or conduct a random drawing so that a few people are rewarded for their efforts. Personally I consider this cheating, people should want to participate because it’s fun, but it does add a bit of drama to it.

Whatever you do, remember that hosting a blogfest is all about having fun and meeting a lot of other writers. On the day of the event, make sure your entry is up, then start commenting! A personal comment from the host is wonderful!

And of course, the wonderful Lilah Pierce essentially made the exact same post as this one a few days ago but I tried not to read it. I still want to give her credit for posting her guidelines first, and you should definitely check her ideas out as well.

Good luck, and happy blogfesting!

Monday, April 26, 2010

Blogqed!

Blogqued!

I hate to say this, but I’m out of good ideas for my blog. Okay, I should say I have some decent ideas, but nothing really worthy of much effort at the moment. So therefore, I’m turning over the blog to you. Ask me anything. Writing technique. Personal stuff. Questions about my stories.Requests for blog topics. Critique requests (public or private).  Anything. Heck, give me some writing prompts and ask for a story. I’ll try to answer at least one question from everyone. Thanks for your support!

And, of course, the Bad Girl Blogfest is May 7, a week from Friday! I just saw a movie with an awesome, awesome Bad Girl.

hit girl comic

KickAssHitGirlHit43

This is Hit-Girl from Kick-Ass! AKA Mindy Macready, the left is the graphic novel version, the right is the movie version played by Chloƫ Grace Moretz.

She reminds me of a bad-ass character I created for NaNoWriMo, Elena Galistina, who started her nefarious career sometime around the same age as Mindy. I may have to include a snippet of Elena in the Bad Girl Blogfest.

 

Seriously, no one knows the left and center characters? The left is a character from a recent graphic novel that is schedule to become a movie, and the center is a character from a TV series that featured a warrior princess. Click on it for a larger image. And yes, the girl on the right is indeed Jessica Rabbit…who BTW is not actually bad, she’s just drawn that way. But I still think of her “that way.”

Sunday, December 27, 2009

Iapetus999’s Top 9 Writer’s Blogs for 2009

top 9 of 2009I am proud to present my picks for Best Writing Blogs of 2009. These are nine of my favorite blogs. I chose them for content, interactivity, and because I just like them and the people who maintain them. Congratulations!

  1. Edittorrent
    —Always has interesting writing tips and discussion.
  2. The Literary Lab
    —A bunch of great bloggers collaborating on advice for writers.
  3. Jordan McCollum
    —Excellent writing analysis and web site reviews.
  4. Victoria Mixon
    —Outstanding essays on writing. Wish they were still free.
  5. Between Fact and Fiction (Natalie Whipple)
    —Great writing advice and inspiration.
  6. The Babbling Flow of a Fledgling Scribbler (Sara McClung)
    —Fun site with lots of information
  7. Miss Snark’s First Victim (Authoress)
    —Very interactive site focusing on helping unpublished writers.
  8. Elana Johnson
    —Another great writer’s site focusing on publication.
  9. Not Enough Words (Merrilee Faber)
    —If you need some tough writer love, this is the place.

Honorable Mentions (no particular order).
These are wonderful blogs you should subscribe to!

If your blog isn’t mentioned, it’s either that I forgot or it got lost in the shuffle of my 250+ blog subscriptions (or you haven’t posted in the last 30 days…get blogging!). This is only a tiny, tiny portion of the blogs I enjoy. Please let me know if I’ve mis-linked anything!

Other Lovely non-writing Blogs you should check out:

Looking forward to a great blogging 2010!

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Monday, October 12, 2009

I Disagree. You Should Too. Contest!

I Disagree. You Should Too. Contest!

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Yes, I’m holding my first-ever WriteRunner blog contest!

I’ve noticed a disturbing trend lately. We’ve become a bloggy nation of yay-sayers. I subscribe to 200+ writing-related blogs, and every comment on these blogs is almost identical: “Way to go.” “Sounds great.” “You’re amazing.”

What every happened to good old-fashioned disagreement? Discussion? Conflicting points of view? Have we come to worship Bloggers as some kind of Deities? Nothing they say can be wrong because they write a blog or published something once? Or are we so afraid of disparaging anyone that we hold our tongues, not wanting to be known as “that commenter” who has a differing opinion? Then, when someone does speak out and counters the blogger’s views, they are summarily vilified by the other commenters. Seriously, is this what you want out of blogging? A bunch of sycophants who agree with and verify everything you write, no matter how ridiculous it is? (BTW none of this applies to my lovely blog readers. You are all awesome). I’m not saying that praise isn’t welcome and warranted (especially on this blog of course). I’m just saying sometimes it’s okay to disagree.

Here’s the thing. I’ve never read a perfect writing blog. Published, unpublished, editor, intern, publisher, etc, all offer various degrees of writing advice. Sometimes, this advice is wrong. I’m sure you’ve heard some if it: “Remove all adverbs and adjectives. Don’t use ‘was’. Start your book with the main conflict. Have a professional write your query letter.” If no one ever says anything, this advice just sits out there for the next unlucky aspiring writer to stumble over.

What ever happened to critical thinking? To sound judgment? To speaking one’s mind despite the prevailing notion of what’s “correct”? At least questioning the blogger to achieve a better understanding of the material.

Therefore, in order to help you practice your critical blog reading skills, I’m holding a contest on this blog. There are two ways to win. In some upcoming posts, I’m going to offer a blatantly wrong piece of advice. Here are some examples (that I won’t use):

  • “Crossing the Threshold” is when the protagonist defeats his arch-enemy.
  • The best writers only write 20 minutes a day.
  • When submitting a manuscript, instead of the Em Dash(—), use the Not Sign (¬).
  • The Yankees deserve to win the World Series.

The first person to comment with a corrected piece of advice wins! So if you replied, “no, the Mariners deserve to win the World Series,” you would win!

The second way to win is to find something you disagree with in one of my upcoming posts, and convince me that my version is incorrect and yours is better. This is completely at my discretion.

The prize will be a book from my recycle pile. You can view the current list here, but this isn’t everything I have available.

Here are the rules:

  1. First person to find the incorrect advice and post a correction in the comment section will be the winner.
  2. Not every blog post contains deliberate misinformation.
  3. Typos and unintentional punctuation/grammar mistakes do not count.
  4. You may only win one prize. If you have won before, don't "give away" the incorrect advice in future posts.
  5. If no one notices the mistake, I’ll be sure to call it out on the next post.
  6. Please find something unintentionally wrong with my upcoming posts if you can. I’m not perfect, I’m not published, and I’m doing my best, but at times I know I throw crap up here. Find it and you can win!
  7. I make no guarantee of the condition of the books in the prize bin. They’re all used to some degree but should be intact. If you win, you can choose your prize.
  8. You agree to not sell your prize and that you will find a way to pass it on or donate it.

The contest starts with my next blog post (probably Friday). If you disagree with anything in this post, sorry. Good luck, and good hunting!

Monday, September 14, 2009

I Try Outlining

I Try Outlining

Story OutlineI’ve worked through a bunch of outlining and issue identification for Dawn’s Rise. At this point, it looks like I may be facing a complete rewrite. The plot can’t work as is, and I would basically be rewriting the whole thing. I don’t feel like doing that. I could write endless blogs on the specific issues, but let me summarize it by saying the whole emotional journey and transformations just aren’t right. I’m not saying that it can’t be salvaged, and that it wouldn’t be worth the effort. The problems are A) I feel really burned out and B) I don’t care that much anymore about the story. I’m beginning to hate my own characters. I know I can fix this into a publishable state. It’s just a cost/benefit/sanity issue at this point.*

So, I’m going to put Dawn’s Rise aside for the time being. I’m much more interested in creating new stories right now. I’ve been working on the same novel for 7 months. I have a partial ms, a couple of ideas, and this “new shiny idea” that I’m fleshing out. You may remember me posting a whimsical “Lover’s Journey” last week. I tried writing the same thing from the woman’s perspective (a would be “Part II”), and I wound up with a decent plot. I mean, a really decent plot. It’s a classic romance: a woman has to choose between a life of comfort and wealth or a life of uncertainty with the man she loves. (Don’t ask me why I keep getting engrossed with stories featuring heroines. But the MMC** in this outline is totally kick-ass, one of the best concepts I’ve had to date, very conflicted.). Romance writer? Me?? I already know my pen name: Andrea Rose. Would make book signings…awkward.

What’s interesting is that I wrote a whole story in under 3000 words. I don’t mean a short story, I mean a whole novel-scoped story. Obviously, it’s all telling with almost no dialog. Now, the story itself is laughably bad, and my wife couldn’t stop from laughing (at me) when I read it to her, but when I stepped back and retold it from a higher level, it worked. I started fleshing it out a bit, taking each paragraph and writing a page of details. Ideas began springing into my head: hmm, this would work as historical fiction. This would work as a Western. Heck, this would be awesome as Steampunk, which would require less research and more creativity. Is this the beauty of the outline method? I captured the essence of the story, the emotional journey, and now I can fill in the settings, the dialog, the subplots and characters to make this thing breathe. I think I may start a new blog category called “Epiphany.”

I’m probably going to work on this for a week or so, and see where it goes. I know that I will return to Dawn’s Rise, but I think I need some distance at this point. I hate doing this because I really want to be able to complete DR, but I also want to enjoy what I’m working on. My other hope is that maybe with this outline method, I can craft drafts that don’t require endless revisions and critiques—that I have the “story” part of the story worked out so I can focus on the details, instead of starting with details and working back to the story.

How has outlining helped you?

[Edit]

A couple bloggers pointed out their series on plotting. Here's a quick list:

If you know of more, add a comment and I'll put it here.

[/Edit]

Couple unrelated notes:

  • I changed up my blog feed so that if you use something like Reader, you should see some links at the bottom of the feed, including a link to tweet my post. If you don’t, you might need to re-subscribe to my feed using the link on the side of my blog. If you don’t know what I’m talking about, don’t worry about it
  • Turns out that there’s a secret pinhole on the bottom of my Netbook that resets it. I couldn’t use it for a week because I thought the problem was with the charger. The battery would just not re-charge, and the Netbook would not run on AC power. When I finally found out about the pinhole, it fixed everything. Now I have 2 chargers, which isn’t so bad.

*I have no idea what outline plan this image relates to, so I neither endorse nor discourage it. It’s for decorative purposes only.
**Male Main Character

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Do I need a Platform to get Published?

Do I need a Platform to get Published?

platform-4-626 I read something today that’s really bothering me. Thanks to Christine for pointing it out. A literary agent blogged that writers need a “platform” before querying her. I’ll give you the quote:

I DON'T want to see in your proposal, "I am willing to start a blog and join social networks to market myself."

I DO want to see: "I've been blogging for a year, with my readership growing steadily. I use Facebook and Twitter to create relationships with potential future readers of my books, and to drive people back to my blog. I'm currently making contact through the blog and social networks with several hundred (or several thousand) people a day."

Here’s the original post by Rachelle Gardner. Note that it’s more directed towards non-fiction, but she says that novelists should pay heed.

Now does she mean that I need to grow my readership by a hundred people a day? Or simply have 300+ subscribers? Either way, holy crap!

BTW I love you guys. By reading this blog, you’ve already proven that you’re smartest and savviest people in the blogosphere. I don’t know if you found me or I found you, but either way I appreciate it.

So apparently I need to grow this thing, fast. I have no idea how to do this, but here are some thoughts. Let me know if you’ve tried any.

  • Follow everyone I can find on Twitter who is either a writer or SciFi fan. The problem with this is that there are a bunch of tweeters I really want to read, and their tweets would get drowned in the crush. I guess I could create a “platform” account that I never read, but that seems lame. Maybe there’s a filtered Twitter reader out there.
  • Comment on every blog I can find. Keep following links around and make myself known across the blogosphere. Become a pest (but add to the conversations).
  • Facebook? Does mean I friend everyone in every writing and SciFi group out there? And do I suck up to all the agents? God I’m starting to feel dirty.
  • Make this blog so interesting that people put links to my entries everywhere. Oh wait—that will never happen. I’d have to do stuff like find authors to interview, have guest bloggers, and not rely on my own random prattling. Or start giving away stuff. Hmmm…

This sounds like more work than writing the damn book…and I need to do this before I even send out query letters! Note that this particular agent doesn’t represent my genre so she’s not on my list, but I think she’s echoing what a lot of agents are thinking nowadays.

The other issue is that I want my friends to read my Facebook and Twitter. I don’t really want random strangers reading details about my colonoscopy. Or even you guys for that matter (I apologize). But I do want them to read my posts about writing and publishing (if/when I ever make any that are worth reading).

So let me know what you think I should be doing. Does this “platform” thing really have merit? Or would I be throwing a lot of energy down a hole when I could have been improving my actual writing? What do you think?

Friday, March 13, 2009

Okay, Now for Day Two + Blogger Rant

Okay, Now for Day Two + Blogger Rant

Well now I'm in the middle of Day Two of my new writing career. So far I haven't published anything or made any money. In fact, so far I've gotten very little of anything done. Here's what I've accomplished:
  • Ran 5 miles yesterday.
  • Swam 45 mins this morning.
  • Tasted a new beer: Full Sail Black Gold Bourbon Barrel Aged Imperial Stout
  • Created a spreadsheet that will become our monthly budget. Already way over budget and I barely started...
  • Applied for Unemployment
  • Finished editing a chapter of The Immortals
  • Visited my banker
  • Enjoyed the Stewart vs Cramer Debate last night
  • Moved a heavy wooden 4-drawer file cabinet upstairs to my home office
  • Wrote a blog post
Speaking of which:
[Blogger Rant]
I am really, really sick of this Blogger editor. (yes this blog is hosted on Blogger) It messes up my formatting all the time. It's the most useless POS I've ever used. Not only that, but using Docs is just as painful. The formatting doesn't really carry over well to Blogger. I probably could have output 5000 more words during NaNoWriMo last year if I wasn't wrestling with the damn formatting issues all the time.
Now I've worked with these guys and I know they're doing their best, but some days I wish they would drop all the other work they're doing and focus on the editing experience (Docs too). I'm aware of the internal politics involved which I can't go into but it's a real shame the end user has to suffer. When blog.writerunner.com goes live, I'm seriously looking into hosting it on another site, either WordPress or LiveJournal. I have accounts on both sites so I should create test blogs to try it out. Anyone have advice on these? Does either have a mobile solution?
My very first computer was a Apple Macintosh 512. I swear that the MacWrite editor that came with it is ten times better than Blogger's or Docs. The problem is that I have a ton of stuff that I've written on floppy disks on the Mac can read...and somehow I lost the mouse/keyboard along the way so the machine is useless.

[/Blogger Rant]

And now for my Diet Tip of the Day:
When you get real hungry, try drinking a lot of water. Not only does it fill you up, but it increases your metabolism and paradoxically helps your body get rid of excess water weight.
My goal is to organize my home office and finances so by Monday I can hit the ground running and really focus on writing. I have my first race of the year Sunday, so I'll be ready.

Sunday, January 18, 2009

Now on Twitter!

Now on Twitter!

I've been meaning to post this for a while.
You can now follow me on Twitter on my feed:

You can also see my feed on the side of this blog.
Speaking of which, you can follow this blog by clicking "Follow This Blog" down on the right.
And of course, feel free to add me as a Facebook friend, there's a link along the right side.


Monday, August 4, 2008

Now with Ratings!

Now with Ratings!

Found a little feature in draft.blogger.com

Now you can rate my posts!


Be nice :)


Saturday, June 28, 2008

Dawn's Rise II Wordle!

Here's the first 10K of Dawn's Rise as a Wordle.
See if you can figure out the names of my main
characters. Be careful...some of the names are
actually place names.
(Click on it to see something a little more readable)

Tuesday, June 17, 2008

100th Post!!

100th Post!

Woot!

It's a party! OK to be fair, a lot these posts are part of my NaNoWriMo blogvel but still...

Now to follow up on a couple topics from yesterday's post:

This weeks BSG had a kind of surprise e
nding (spoiler if you haven't seen it):

They reach Earth... and "surprise" it's a post-apocalyptic dead zone. It appears that Earth has been destroyed far worse than Caprica was. Now was this really a surprise? No not really.

What would have been surprising?
Well I can think of a few things:
  • Earth was the home of the "advanced" Cylons. Or some super-advanced cylons that leave the current ones in the dust.
  • BSG meets the Federation. Or the Borg.
  • WALL-E world!
Anyways, predictability = bad m'kay?

Okay so now that my rant is out of the way, how would everyone like some delicious Ten Fidy Imperial Stout...the best beer to ever come out of a can.

Go on, help yourself, just crash here if you start getting loopy. :)






Saturday, April 19, 2008

A Medical Update


A Medical Update


First of all, for those of you who actually look at the blog, you'll see a few changes...namely the live blogroll that shows the last 5 posts from people on my blog roll...if you don't see your blog, let me know and I'll add you! :)

So as far as the medical stuff, this year has been challenging from the injury point of view (fortunately no major illnesses although my daughter has had a fever for days :( )

I hurt my back snowboarding at the end of Feb, and it took me about 4 weeks of physical therapy to recover from that. But then as I got better, I started running a lot more, and now I've been diagnosed with Achilles Insertional Calcific Tendonitis. This is causing me a lot of pain in the back of my heel, and some days I can barely run. (no that's not my foot)



So now I'm doing a couple of things for therapy:
  • Wearing a foot splint at night
  • Ultrasound therapy
  • Ice massage (stick your leg into an icy glacial stream for full effect)
  • Eccentric Loading for my calf















Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Does anybody now see


Does Anybody Now See

The friggin' Bird on a Stick image behind the title of this blog??
I've been trying to get this image to show up for months...apparently it was too wide...and since it's hosted on Blogger.com and my site is dawnsrise.com...it won't show up! Some cross-site blocking...

This is an actual picture that I actually took myself on a run a couple years ago.
Anyways if you still can't see it...I'm going to f-ing rip a hole in something.

Has anyone noticed the whole "time and date" thingy they added to Blogger? I can set the time that this post shows up at. Now I can re-order posts if I need too! I really could have used this during NaNoWriMo so I didn't have to fiddle with post things at odd hours.

So I'm looking at a new writing project...I want to write a screenplay about my college years. So many crazy things happened...if I condensed 4 years of antics into a compressed format I think it would be really interesting.

The only problem is that I was the world biggest loser in College...and who wants to see a movie about a loser? I didn't have any redeeming accomplishments either.
But I did interact with a lot of fascinating people...one in particular is probably going to be the focus of my script...the guy who forever changed my life on one drunken road trip (think Beer Fest...not Crying Game...Jeez)

I'm also determined to start updating this blog regularly even if I have nothing to say. I'm tired of everyone else having all the blogging fun.

I sent some emails to some college roomies to see if they could remember some details I can't. I've never written a memoir before...should be an interesting trip!

Tuesday, February 12, 2008

I need inspiration!


30 Plot Ideas in 30 Days

I came across this obnoxious blog today which I really don't want to promote in the slightest so I'm not going to mention what it is or what it's about. (and this image has nothing to do with it either...it's a random image I got from Googling "30 Days") Anywho...it gave me an idea, that I should try to write 90 plot ideas in 90 days. However, that being a long time, I think I should pare it down to a more reasonable 30 days.
However this brings up some issues:
  1. Do I have to write one plot each day or can I skip & make up? Do they need to be consecutive days?
  2. Should I re-label my blog? ie: The WriteRunner:30 Plot Ideas in 30 Days
  3. Can I only think of plots while running? (which I usually only do 4 days/week)
  4. Should I get other people involved/committed ala NaNoWriMo? I could probably post something up on the NaNo boards.
  5. What do I do with the ideas when I'm done?
  6. What should I do if I win?
It's an interesting project. I can think up a bunch of neat ideas and I don't have to commit to months of fleshing it out. Maybe I could follow it up with 30 characters in 30 days or something (or places, scenes, inventions, disasters, etc). Then when I'm done farting around I may actually write something useful...


Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Blog Rating


My Blog is Rated PG

Well it's official, my blog is rated PG!!
What's My Blog Rated?

This rating was determined based on the presence of the following words:

  • crap (2x)
  • death (1x)

So what the fuck? Haven't I fucking poured my god damn heart out here? How the hell am I supposed to write shit if I can't even earn an 'R' rating? I've had it with these motherfucking people on this motherfucking internet! If you asshole douchebags don't think my writing is the shit, then go to hell!


There, how's that PG rating now???

Friday, September 28, 2007

Notice anything New? + next Wild Mary's Way Chapter

I created my own custom domain. Now this blog is at http://blog.dawnsrise.com

I'm still trying to figure out how to get my published docs to show up there, instead of docs.google.com

Anyways here is the next chapter in Wild Mary's Way.
Chapter 3 - The Wizard

And now for the scathing critique of my own writing (read it first or this may spoil it)
This is supposed to be the scene where Mary meets her nemesis/savior/best friend/worst enemy. The whole thing just doesn't work. The point of the chapter is that he has this power to disarm her thru his words, using somewhat psychoanalytical techniques. He's supposed to be this peaceful do-gooder. I think he breaks her down too easily. His technique is to essentially hold a mirror up to her, and just tell her exactly what he sees in her. The truth is sometimes the most vicious weapon, and he certainly felt threatened although he couldn't show it.

The point of turning her into a mess is to illustrate just how messed up she it. She still isn't in control of her emotions, and is just discovering her sexual side (more to come on that in later chapters)

Well if I had a couple of days I could re-write this chapter, but I'm just letting it go for now.