Sunday, September 30, 2007

Wild Mary's Way chap 4

Chapter 4 - Traveling Together

Chapter 4

Commentary to be read after reading the chapter:
So chap 4 wasn't great either. She encounters some more people but can't control her aggression. The wizard makes peace with everyone.
He wants her to not think of everyone as an enemy. I think this chapter failes because the encounter is kind of strange and she falls apart again. He's really preachy and not very helpful to her.

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