Monday, January 17, 2011

What Makes a Hero

What Makes a Hero

HF_LogoIn the last two weeks, against the backdrop of me frantically preparing for this week’s Writer’s Digest Conference, I’ve had two massive projects dropped in my lap.

The first, which I’ve chronicled in my last two posts, is the story of my cousin Barney and his heroic rescue of his family from persecution in the 1920’s.

The second, which I won’t detail due to privacy issues, is the memoir of a new member of one of my writing groups where he chronicles his dealings with mental illness. Let’s call him Joe. I’ve been helping him figure out how to structure his account.

Both are true stories, and both share something amazing: a true Hero in both the real and the literary sense of the word. As I learn about both stories, I realize that these are stories that absolutely must be told. Not only that, they both revolve around probably the greatest motivator in the world: the need for love and connection with our fellow man.

Here are some of the things that makes them Heroes.

  • They are broken in some way. In Barney’s case, in 1920 he is living with his sister at 25. He seems to be stuck in some kind of rut. We’re still researching, but it seems to me he led a quiet, sheltered life without much interaction outside of his house. But he left his family to come to America at an early age—why?
    In Joe’s case, let’s just say at age 40 he’s an incomplete man but he want to be complete. He wants relationships and family.
  • They are presented with a challenge/invited to go on a Journey. Barney is faced with a letter from the old country pleading for help. Joe falls in love with a woman, probably for the first time in his life.
  • The Journey is dangerous. Mortally dangerous (is there any other kind?). This is not a journey to take lightly. Barney literally faces armed forces. Joe literally faces Demons. (not supernatural. I can’t be more specific than that but I assure you that they are violent and malevolent).
  • The Journey promises a great Reward. In Barney’s case, it is the reunification of his family. In Joe’s case, it is even simpler. He’s looking for love.
  • There is a parallel, inner Journey occurring. On the outside, both men are fighting for their families, taking on the demons that block their progress at every turn. But the greatest demons are the ones in our own heads. What the Journey teaches them, by defeating the outer demons, is how to take on their inner demons and win.

So now, the question for me as I head to New York, is what about little Miss Sophia Stratton, the main character of Steam Palace? Does she in any way compare to these real-life heroes?

I see her story a little like Barney’s. She leads a somewhat sheltered life. She’s avoided relationships, lived with her mother and older sister’s family (whoa---way parallel). She’s kept her nose to the grindstone, perhaps like Barney, and never looked at the “bigger picture.”

She’s had Calls to Adventure in the form of letters from her Aunt, begging her to visit, but it’s not until her own life becomes so untenable that she accepts it. In Sophia’s case, the Journey isn’t quite as well-defined, which may be something I need to look at. It’s actually a series of journeys, all revolving around her twin sister Viola. At the core, Sophia is trying to honor her father’s memory, to right a wrong that occurred long ago.

The Reward for Sophia is fairly clear: her family survives. But she is presented with an even greater reward: if she completes the journey, she will gain what her father lost: their ancestral lands and peerage. But there’s a reward greater than all of those out there: her twin sister Viola. This goes to the heart of the Evil Twin metaphor: by confronting your twin, you are really confronting yourself. Sophia not only sees what she could have become, but she learns to appreciate what she has. So if she can come to terms with Viola and who Viola is, Sophia is really coming to terms with who Sophia is, and that’s the Inner Demon she must ultimately conquer. Like Joe, Sophia realizes that her love for her sister can heal Viola, and by doing so, can heal the hole in her own heart left when her father died.

Have you looked at your own work to see what your character gains from the Journey? How do they change, and what do learn from the experience? How do they start broken in some way and then wind up more complete?


  1. New follower and I just wanted to say that I found both the stories in this very inspiring. I hope to read these works someday!

  2. My characters gain love, friends, 'gifts' and so much more. But at the same time they're giving up family, friends and a world they loved. Every journey requires sacrifice.

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  3. Hey Andrew, it's been a long time. I have some catching up to do on your blog.
    All of my protagonists reasons for existence is to mend or come to terms with their broken aspects. My sister calls them my therapy. lol. Their arc is their healing.

  4. @Suite: Welcome to the blog!

    @Nicole: I like the "sacrifice" idea. Barney gives up his nice, safe, predictable world. Joe gives up his idea of ever having a "normal" life. But what they gain is enormous. Sophia sees her ideals crushed and her land destroyed, but she gains the position to correct these wrongs.

    @Erin: Healing is a great motif. I think all the characters I mentioned need healing...the problem is that to everyone but themselves, they don't realize that they need to.
    Maybe the "Call to Adventure" is really a "Call to Therapy." :)

  5. I have looked at my own first series, b/c so many postings out there tell that the first story a writer tells is their own in some form.

    I don't disagree. My MC story is not my own, specifically, but it is something I have witnessed growing up. So . .

    Perhaps we all get our greatest inspiration from our own lives. Where the story goes however may be completely different.

    You'll work out your discrepancies. You're too experienced a writer not to come out a winner on all counts. Exploration of your writing motivations never ends; it makes a stronger writer.

    Good luck at the WD conference. I'm so envious, I wish I could have gone. Perhaps next year :)


  6. Good luck at the conference Andrew and all the best with your MS. I like the anology you gave here of the Hero's journey, good questions indeed.


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