<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post8674466847354909624..comments</id><updated>2010-03-18T06:26:39.119-07:00</updated><category term='Novel Design'/><category term='Free Plot Idea'/><category term='30 Days: The Singularity Matrix'/><category term='Running and Race Reports'/><category term='FridayFlash'/><category term='Blogfest'/><category term='Epiphany'/><category term='Dawn&apos;s Rise'/><category term='Random Rants'/><category term='Science Fiction Commentary'/><category term='Publishing A Novel'/><category term='NaNoWriMo'/><category term='Blogging Tips and Tricks'/><category term='30 Days: The Infinity Event'/><category term='Character Types'/><category term='The Hero&apos;s Journey'/><category term='Authors and Book Reviews'/><category term='Mystery'/><category term='Disaster Scenarios'/><category term='About Me'/><category term='TV Show Critiques'/><category term='Scene Structure'/><category term='Steam Palace'/><category term='Steampunk'/><category term='The Immortals'/><title type='text'>Comments on Dawn's Rise: Scene Structure Part VI – The Reversal</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/feeds/8674466847354909624/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html'/><author><name>Andrew Rosenberg</name><uri>https://profiles.google.com/100329816310941457945</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='//lh4.googleusercontent.com/-2xe5vJtOAFw/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAB8E/XmAahmKbV0w/s512-c/photo.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>9</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-6433863326596227315</id><published>2010-03-18T06:26:39.115-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-18T06:26:39.115-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Its funny, I&amp;#39;ve never really thought about thi...</title><content type='html'>Its funny, I&amp;#39;ve never really thought about this before, but I now realize that I have done this on occasion before. Now that I know what to call it, and the situations to look for I will try to do it intentionally:)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;By the way, over on my blog I decided to give you the Honest Scrap award. Just to let you know:)</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/6433863326596227315'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/6433863326596227315'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268918799115#c6433863326596227315' title=''/><author><name>Ryan</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/11709819500632207934</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='06417885329003151889'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='30' height='32' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_c4RjIGb1NtY/SgPXcLrv3JI/AAAAAAAAAAM/rENTs8gEHM4/S220/me.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1026041317'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-6157310216141470642</id><published>2010-03-17T20:42:22.762-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-17T20:42:22.762-07:00</updated><title type='text'>A conflict a page keeps boredom at bay... 

Awesom...</title><content type='html'>A conflict a page keeps boredom at bay... &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Awesome post. Something we should all (as writers) look for in our work.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/6157310216141470642'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/6157310216141470642'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268883742762#c6157310216141470642' title=''/><author><name>Jm Diaz</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/02542245056831474827</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='04071270077310461300'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='24' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_XwqCrNi8340/S1EDIUsRwMI/AAAAAAAACOw/9LtMTMnV2Mk/S220/DSC05627.JPG'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-529703479'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8846073520761243548</id><published>2010-03-17T14:58:16.376-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-17T14:58:16.376-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Glad that this is helpful.

@cat: I&amp;#39;ve thought...</title><content type='html'>Glad that this is helpful.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;@cat: I&amp;#39;ve thought about it, but I really need some pub creds for something like that.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/8846073520761243548'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/8846073520761243548'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268863096376#c8846073520761243548' title=''/><author><name>Iapetus999</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_M3sVh6CiMfU/SuYPjLbntrI/AAAAAAAAA-s/9fGg23Duc1o/S220/2009-10-23+Steamcon+2009+006_thumb.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1133019462'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-2157467299372698782</id><published>2010-03-17T14:16:33.825-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-17T14:16:33.825-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I love your examples.  It is alway so much easier ...</title><content type='html'>I love your examples.  It is alway so much easier to see something when we can relate.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Once again, you&amp;#39;ve made me really think about my writing.  Have you ever thought of signing on as a writing coach?</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/2157467299372698782'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/2157467299372698782'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268860593825#c2157467299372698782' title=''/><author><name>catwoods</name><uri>http://catwoods.wordpress.com</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img1.blogblog.com/img/openid16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-278708499'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-4112501623025731721</id><published>2010-03-17T00:58:01.086-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-17T00:58:01.086-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I love this. Yet another winning post. Hmmm...now ...</title><content type='html'>I love this. Yet another winning post. Hmmm...now to go mess with my characters...</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/4112501623025731721'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/4112501623025731721'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268812681086#c4112501623025731721' title=''/><author><name>Tina Lynn</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='14941741990877421547'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_wcRsy9eKGKA/Sy6KuEfOQ6I/AAAAAAAAAHM/Wt0rJDDzFcU/S220/Me+and+Jen.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1411643410'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3697183554907445532</id><published>2010-03-16T21:22:58.725-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-16T21:22:58.725-07:00</updated><title type='text'>hmm; this could fix a problem area for me.  I&amp;#39;...</title><content type='html'>hmm; this could fix a problem area for me.  I&amp;#39;ll have to try it out.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;.........dhole</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/3697183554907445532'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/3697183554907445532'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268799778725#c3697183554907445532' title=''/><author><name>Donna Hole</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='10566529908825062953'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='24' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_dRvhC92Ur3E/Sm6cGfErHkI/AAAAAAAAAA0/yXVlykkSsBs/S220/Picture+001.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-165822808'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3440289054683147789</id><published>2010-03-16T14:57:50.865-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-16T14:57:50.865-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Nice tip! I like the idea of it and may use it one...</title><content type='html'>Nice tip! I like the idea of it and may use it one of these days.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/3440289054683147789'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/3440289054683147789'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268776670865#c3440289054683147789' title=''/><author><name>Myne Whitman</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='04111619161802160506'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_32Z8uQDnEI0/S3nKEKmX0vI/AAAAAAAAAXw/SGIkaBZA-F8/S220/IMG_0002+-+Copy.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-16696196'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-2197917660327995140</id><published>2010-03-15T17:42:17.249-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-15T17:42:17.249-07:00</updated><title type='text'>I&amp;#39;ve gotten behind with these...I have some ca...</title><content type='html'>I&amp;#39;ve gotten behind with these...I have some catching up to do! Great post!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/2197917660327995140'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/2197917660327995140'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268700137249#c2197917660327995140' title=''/><author><name>Laura Eno</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='06393073966760238409'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_bK4x9SamMNU/SxvDBB32xrI/AAAAAAAAAFc/uR4PszTr5zA/S220/avatar+laura%40lauraeno_com_6768c158.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1499128697'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-4254775871233286507</id><published>2010-03-15T13:41:17.914-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-15T13:41:17.914-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Wow, this post came at a really great time for me....</title><content type='html'>Wow, this post came at a really great time for me.  I&amp;#39;m in the middle of almost this very same thing and this &amp;#39;reversal&amp;#39; thing is fantastic.  Thanks Andrew.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/4254775871233286507'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8674466847354909624/comments/default/4254775871233286507'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html?showComment=1268685677914#c4254775871233286507' title=''/><author><name>Piedmont Writer</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='20' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_EJ5ckwx33SQ/Sx1kQkBlMjI/AAAAAAAAAA8/g5JQ02ejcEU/S220/another+me+copy.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-vi-reversal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8674466847354909624' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8674466847354909624' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-2022286500'/></entry></feed>
