<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post8392953213059744299..comments</id><updated>2010-01-13T09:52:20.454-08:00</updated><category term='Novel Design'/><category term='Free Plot Idea'/><category term='30 Days: The Singularity Matrix'/><category term='Running and Race Reports'/><category term='FridayFlash'/><category term='Blogfest'/><category term='Epiphany'/><category term='Dawn&apos;s Rise'/><category term='Random Rants'/><category term='Science Fiction Commentary'/><category term='Publishing A Novel'/><category term='NaNoWriMo'/><category term='Blogging Tips and Tricks'/><category term='30 Days: The Infinity Event'/><category term='Character Types'/><category term='The Hero&apos;s Journey'/><category term='Authors and Book Reviews'/><category term='Mystery'/><category term='Disaster Scenarios'/><category term='About Me'/><category term='TV Show Critiques'/><category term='Scene Structure'/><category term='Steam Palace'/><category term='Steampunk'/><category term='The Immortals'/><title type='text'>Comments on Dawn's Rise: Steam Palace No-Kiss Blogfest Entry</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/feeds/8392953213059744299/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html'/><author><name>Andrew Rosenberg</name><uri>https://profiles.google.com/100329816310941457945</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='//lh4.googleusercontent.com/-2xe5vJtOAFw/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAB8E/XmAahmKbV0w/s512-c/photo.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>9</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-951921273172015690</id><published>2010-01-03T17:23:26.135-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-03T17:23:26.135-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I&amp;#39;m very intrigued, the character relationship...</title><content type='html'>I&amp;#39;m very intrigued, the character relationships are interesting as is the world, I would so read more!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/951921273172015690'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/951921273172015690'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262568206135#c951921273172015690' title=''/><author><name>Hayley</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16786674202167099600</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='24' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_ZUGQIZ1BMXI/Sz6sq-h1J9I/AAAAAAAAABA/NeXFSuJI4G4/S220/Babies.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1060743035'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1074643315431839377</id><published>2010-01-03T09:42:23.876-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-03T09:42:23.876-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I really connect with your character and could fee...</title><content type='html'>I really connect with your character and could feel Thomas&amp;#39;s pain. Poor guy...</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/1074643315431839377'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/1074643315431839377'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262540543876#c1074643315431839377' title=''/><author><name>Myne Whitman</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='04111619161802160506'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='24' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_32Z8uQDnEI0/SvufSFicjlI/AAAAAAAAAEo/m-EmsfAb5po/S220/Cartoon+Pic.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-16696196'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3364162201254448171</id><published>2010-01-02T23:47:50.474-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T23:47:50.474-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Thanks!
Well, Pru does like him, but he&amp;#39;s been...</title><content type='html'>Thanks!&lt;br /&gt;Well, Pru does like him, but he&amp;#39;s been so mopey with his injured leg and she&amp;#39;s been too obsessed with the glamorous Duke to really have anything happen--yet.&lt;br /&gt;But they are about to embark on adventure that will change everything...</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/3364162201254448171'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/3364162201254448171'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262504870474#c3364162201254448171' title=''/><author><name>Iapetus999</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_M3sVh6CiMfU/SuYPjLbntrI/AAAAAAAAA-s/9fGg23Duc1o/S220/2009-10-23+Steamcon+2009+006_thumb.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1133019462'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8046066325212062516</id><published>2010-01-02T21:57:42.037-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T21:57:42.037-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Aw, poor Thomas!  I hope Pru sees the light...he s...</title><content type='html'>Aw, poor Thomas!  I hope Pru sees the light...he seems like a loyal friend and someone who would genuinely care for her if things escalated.&lt;br /&gt;Great job!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/8046066325212062516'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/8046066325212062516'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262498262037#c8046066325212062516' title=''/><author><name>Julie</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07850344847209933016</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='07993403365436613990'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='18' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_0U87xm4Hc7Y/SnytY-GJDTI/AAAAAAAAABk/UPcKrGsXVQ8/S220/blog+pic.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1310621064'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-5650025120197209570</id><published>2010-01-02T20:31:11.469-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T20:31:11.469-08:00</updated><title type='text'>okay I WANT to know what happened between them! Pr...</title><content type='html'>okay I WANT to know what happened between them! Pru&amp;#39;s character&amp;#39;s ramblyness (and yes, that&amp;#39;s my own made up word I believe...) is charming and funny!  I feel horrible for Thomas... the friend in love with another friend who doesn&amp;#39;t seem to love them back is such a sticky situation!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/5650025120197209570'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/5650025120197209570'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262493071469#c5650025120197209570' title=''/><author><name>Sara McClung ♥</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09824996048264979275</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='13938224068088431756'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='30' height='32' src='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_871SdrUIr8Q/Su_8JEh0u-I/AAAAAAAAALU/BVhQpG7wE7o/S220/twitpic10.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-70212314'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1745241142214978853</id><published>2010-01-02T16:24:37.342-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T16:24:37.342-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Poor Thomas. I feel for him. What a miserable way ...</title><content type='html'>Poor Thomas. I feel for him. What a miserable way to find out what was between them. Thanks for sharing this!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/1745241142214978853'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/1745241142214978853'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262478277342#c1745241142214978853' title=''/><author><name>Amalia T.</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='25' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_MdnoZW5vEGQ/SiHtRG-Lh9I/AAAAAAAAAAU/lIbHN6ObjZM/S220/workshopWINtext.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-755760030'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3795203820141204263</id><published>2010-01-02T14:07:37.518-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T14:07:37.518-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Ah jealousy, heartache, joy. Way to include so man...</title><content type='html'>Ah jealousy, heartache, joy. Way to include so many emotions in one scene. I felt for everyone involved. Nicely done!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://karenamandahooper.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"&gt;My Blog&lt;/a&gt;</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/3795203820141204263'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/3795203820141204263'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262470057518#c3795203820141204263' title=''/><author><name>Karen Amanda Hooper</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/10789825860272178765</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_32THbbbgLPk/Sd6qTX73DOI/AAAAAAAAAG0/h0BpTAh8-Ho/S220/l_63ca2863b8cccc48174fc5863491c9dd.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1889681853'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-861638158727019704</id><published>2010-01-02T13:49:09.097-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T13:49:09.097-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Your characters are incredibly real. I love that, ...</title><content type='html'>Your characters are incredibly real. I love that, fabulous scene and story!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/861638158727019704'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/861638158727019704'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262468949097#c861638158727019704' title=''/><author><name>V. S</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/00406440235719919992</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='18' height='32' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_wikBrLhn2f0/SwgUaOg6IMI/AAAAAAAAAa0/rnoNRMQJkow/S220/blk.JPG'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-314768272'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8195090521219363499</id><published>2010-01-02T11:56:49.785-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-02T11:56:49.785-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I love these characters and this world! Really, I ...</title><content type='html'>I love these characters and this world! Really, I want to read this story, and pray there is hope for the valient Thomas. Super work.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/8195090521219363499'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/8392953213059744299/comments/default/8195090521219363499'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html?showComment=1262462209785#c8195090521219363499' title=''/><author><name>Tricia J. O'Brien</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='24' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_0YTf-CqXwWY/SyQIdWxMFFI/AAAAAAAAAUw/rb44-oqV3hM/S220/blogpix+033.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/steam-palace-no-kiss-blogfest-entry.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-8392953213059744299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/8392953213059744299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-2085673303'/></entry></feed>
