tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post4508289020029198494..comments2023-07-23T02:07:51.261-07:00Comments on Dawn's Rise: Bad Girl Blogfest – ElenaAndrew Rosenberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-21856038879612297302010-05-10T10:35:41.236-07:002010-05-10T10:35:41.236-07:00@Val: Yeah, Elena is not as conflicted as Mary...s...@Val: Yeah, Elena is not as conflicted as Mary...she likes what she does and is a consummate professional, only killing when she has to. Yeah, she does long for a "normal" life but will fight the bad guys with everything she has.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-68439472425389106202010-05-10T10:20:17.677-07:002010-05-10T10:20:17.677-07:00Now THAT is a bad girl. Bravo! The use of the sile...Now THAT is a bad girl. Bravo! The use of the silent treatment in particular is awesome. I feel bad for those kids... obviously not as well trained as she is.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-29553294528482965942010-05-09T08:15:37.856-07:002010-05-09T08:15:37.856-07:00@Roland: Ah yes, the teeth. Her favorite weapon of...@Roland: Ah yes, the teeth. Her favorite weapon of choice.<br /><br />@Elizabeth: I can do present tense once I start but I don't do it often enough.<br /><br />@Eric: Good catch. Yup, present tense tripping me up.<br /><br />@Tara : Thanks<br /><br />@JAS: Yeah, she's bad. But in a good way.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-5816857150128392622010-05-08T20:45:29.976-07:002010-05-08T20:45:29.976-07:00I'm with Roland...that line made me cringe.
A...I'm with Roland...that line made me cringe.<br /><br />All of these are definite bad girls. I'm not sure if I can pick one who's more "bad" than the others, but for some reason, so far, I'm tempted to go with this one.Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-7143124110628542732010-05-07T15:25:39.093-07:002010-05-07T15:25:39.093-07:00I liked this one; definitely a bad girl here.
Thi...I liked this one; definitely a bad girl here.<br /><br />This had a good flow to it.Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-74173344596142438702010-05-07T08:57:55.032-07:002010-05-07T08:57:55.032-07:00Wow, I didn't even NOTICE the present tense un...Wow, I didn't even NOTICE the present tense until I got to the comments. That says something: It says it was perfectly executed, which is dang hard to do.<br /><br />I did see a couple of slips on re-read, e.g. "She pulled off the vest," but otherwise it was a smooth read and I slipped in and enjoyed it.<br /><br /> - EricEric W. Tranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13842968931062056407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-92197274614278994682010-05-07T06:34:57.177-07:002010-05-07T06:34:57.177-07:00I loved this scene! I also enjoyed the present ten...I loved this scene! I also enjoyed the present tense, although that's probably a pain to keep up since we're all used to writing in past tense.Elizabeth Poolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03214706118828699708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-75511687045447704742010-05-06T23:21:43.567-07:002010-05-06T23:21:43.567-07:00"You remember what I did in the house, don’t ..."You remember what I did in the house, don’t you? The teeth?"<br /><br />Ouch.<br /><br />But I like her intelligence and humor, dragging her "victim" behind the truck. You're right. She's a lot of fun. My kind of bad girl. RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.com