<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post3967920358150109299..comments</id><updated>2010-03-17T16:16:18.308-07:00</updated><category term='Novel Design'/><category term='Free Plot Idea'/><category term='30 Days: The Singularity Matrix'/><category term='Running and Race Reports'/><category term='FridayFlash'/><category term='Blogfest'/><category term='Epiphany'/><category term='Dawn&apos;s Rise'/><category term='Random Rants'/><category term='Science Fiction Commentary'/><category term='Publishing A Novel'/><category term='NaNoWriMo'/><category term='Blogging Tips and Tricks'/><category term='30 Days: The Infinity Event'/><category term='Character Types'/><category term='The Hero&apos;s Journey'/><category term='Authors and Book Reviews'/><category term='Mystery'/><category term='Disaster Scenarios'/><category term='About Me'/><category term='TV Show Critiques'/><category term='Scene Structure'/><category term='Steam Palace'/><category term='Steampunk'/><category term='The Immortals'/><title type='text'>Comments on Dawn's Rise: Scene Structure Part V – Plot Circles</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/feeds/3967920358150109299/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html'/><author><name>Andrew Rosenberg</name><uri>https://profiles.google.com/100329816310941457945</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='//lh4.googleusercontent.com/-2xe5vJtOAFw/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAB8E/XmAahmKbV0w/s512-c/photo.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>8</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-7286325864129272754</id><published>2010-03-17T16:16:18.299-07:00</published><updated>2010-03-17T16:16:18.299-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Useful topic to cover, thanks!  This is where outs...</title><content type='html'>Useful topic to cover, thanks!  This is where outside readers are really helpful.  Writing, and even editing, is such a slow process that it&amp;#39;s hard to keep everything in your head.  Someone who reads the whole novel in a few days can easily point out those dangling threads you didn&amp;#39;t even realize you were dangling.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/7286325864129272754'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/7286325864129272754'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268867778299#c7286325864129272754' title=''/><author><name>Lindsay B</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07955277387824031696</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='30' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_vbxQKGmBPm8/S0Fn6I8JysI/AAAAAAAAAAM/VNxRDvxOnik/S220/goblin-pic.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-606082554'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1325376980483913185</id><published>2010-03-12T07:29:34.145-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-12T07:29:34.145-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Just what I needed today.  I am embarking on my Na...</title><content type='html'>Just what I needed today.  I am embarking on my NaNo09 edit which has many plot holes.  Highlighting right up front will help me as I make my way through the manuscript.  I&amp;#39;d rather do it on a first rewrite than after I&amp;#39;ve revised to the point where it&amp;#39;s difficult to add or subtract.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Timely and great advice--as always.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/1325376980483913185'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/1325376980483913185'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268407774145#c1325376980483913185' title=''/><author><name>catwoods</name><uri>http://catwoods.wordpress.com</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img1.blogblog.com/img/openid16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-278708499'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3193699874526189180</id><published>2010-03-10T21:04:06.805-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-10T21:04:06.805-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I guess I could have just called this &amp;quot;Plot H...</title><content type='html'>I guess I could have just called this &amp;quot;Plot Holes&amp;quot; but the point is to make sure each scene is consistent.&lt;br /&gt;Thanks for the comments!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/3193699874526189180'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/3193699874526189180'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268283846805#c3193699874526189180' title=''/><author><name>Iapetus999</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='25' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_M3sVh6CiMfU/SuYPjLbntrI/AAAAAAAAA-s/9fGg23Duc1o/S220/2009-10-23+Steamcon+2009+006_thumb.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1133019462'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-9044908295624784486</id><published>2010-03-09T00:32:47.227-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-09T00:32:47.227-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Oh, man. My eyes have been opened and I have some ...</title><content type='html'>Oh, man. My eyes have been opened and I have some major work to do. You are the man!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/9044908295624784486'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/9044908295624784486'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268123567227#c9044908295624784486' title=''/><author><name>Tina Lynn</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='14941741990877421547'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_wcRsy9eKGKA/Sy6KuEfOQ6I/AAAAAAAAAHM/Wt0rJDDzFcU/S220/Me+and+Jen.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1411643410'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-2195274128745370720</id><published>2010-03-08T23:18:13.589-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-08T23:18:13.589-08:00</updated><title type='text'>This is great advice.  I highlight things for myse...</title><content type='html'>This is great advice.  I highlight things for myself so I can find them later.  I don&amp;#39;t think I go that detailed though.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;........dhole</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/2195274128745370720'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/2195274128745370720'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268119093589#c2195274128745370720' title=''/><author><name>Donna Hole</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='10566529908825062953'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='24' src='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_dRvhC92Ur3E/Sm6cGfErHkI/AAAAAAAAAA0/yXVlykkSsBs/S220/Picture+001.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-165822808'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3844404329764832559</id><published>2010-03-08T15:10:00.235-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-08T15:10:00.235-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I like the props thing. That&amp;#39;s so important!</title><content type='html'>I like the props thing. That&amp;#39;s so important!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/3844404329764832559'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/3844404329764832559'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268089800235#c3844404329764832559' title=''/><author><name>Lady Glamis</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_aRPQuVe8gKo/SzJDFhBxA7I/AAAAAAAAGO4/q4EB0zFRCLg/S220/_MG_1880.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1181134318'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-5010100922946461870</id><published>2010-03-08T12:39:43.042-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-08T12:39:43.042-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I love the tips and pointers you share. In my writ...</title><content type='html'>I love the tips and pointers you share. In my writing, I prefer the onion peel method where I might only reveal the back story towards the end of the book.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/5010100922946461870'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/5010100922946461870'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268080783042#c5010100922946461870' title=''/><author><name>Myne Whitman</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='04111619161802160506'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_32Z8uQDnEI0/S3nKEKmX0vI/AAAAAAAAAXw/SGIkaBZA-F8/S220/IMG_0002+-+Copy.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-16696196'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1813288656604562378</id><published>2010-03-08T11:56:33.534-08:00</published><updated>2010-03-08T11:56:33.534-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I really love the points you mentioned here. I lov...</title><content type='html'>I really love the points you mentioned here. I love especially how you say to mark unended plot lines.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ann</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/1813288656604562378'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/3967920358150109299/comments/default/1813288656604562378'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html?showComment=1268078193534#c1813288656604562378' title=''/><author><name>Ann Elle Altman</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/02192162600274764681</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='11050332088775238086'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='21' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/__n-sUXLtY88/SxVYW8qIVZI/AAAAAAAAAA4/4lTLvPzVf7A/S220/41xJBKlK%2BFL._SL160_.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/03/scene-structure-part-v-plot-circles.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-3967920358150109299' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/3967920358150109299' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1788840761'/></entry></feed>
