tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post3256856859067114651..comments2023-07-23T02:07:51.261-07:00Comments on Dawn's Rise: First Kiss Blogfest – Dawn’s RiseAndrew Rosenberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-582632744772324872010-04-10T16:48:03.922-07:002010-04-10T16:48:03.922-07:00Interesting approach to the kiss blogfest. Since I...Interesting approach to the kiss blogfest. Since I go by Dawn (and have been called Dawnie online) it caught my attention in particular. lol<br /><br />Good job with the scene. I'm just curious about one thing. Do you ever have anyone comment on the writing about characters with similar sounding names? <br />My old critique group would always make comments on that, saying two characters with similar looking/sounding names was a bad thing and confused readers. *shrugs* just wondering.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-62695405397107029672010-04-10T15:11:21.709-07:002010-04-10T15:11:21.709-07:00I really like it! Loved the description of her li...I really like it! Loved the description of her lips shining with gloss and her almond eyes! Thanks for digging for it! I think you have a knack for romance! Thanks for participating with me. My entry is posted if you want to check it out!Melissa Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10677077308421607728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-21407424329968950002010-04-10T14:38:29.336-07:002010-04-10T14:38:29.336-07:00I like it too. What happens when they get togethe...I like it too. What happens when they get together? Hhmmmmm....Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.com