Comments on Dawn's Rise: Revision Test Results!

Interesting test, great idea to do this! (I would ...

2010-02-27T17:21:51.540-08:00

Interesting test, great idea to do this! (I would do this myself, but um, I don't think it would be fair to subject people to anything of mine before revision...

Wow; that was a lot of energy and thought into the...

2010-02-27T03:30:44.273-08:00

Wow; that was a lot of energy and thought into the revision. It shows you know exactly where you are going with, and what you want from, this story. The comments here, and on the last post, also confirms you are definitely getting the plot across.

Thanks for sharing your process and your excerpt with us. It was a most intriguing exercise.

...........dhole

This was interesting, Andrew! Like one of my exper...

2010-02-26T15:30:28.088-08:00

This was interesting, Andrew! Like one of my experiment lit lab posts, hehe. So much fun! It's amazing what we learn over time. :)

Thanks for sharing, I couldn't come over yeste...

2010-02-26T13:28:58.762-08:00

Thanks for sharing, I couldn't come over yesterday though I saw it on google reader. I also thought the ist was the revised.

The results are very interesting : ) And I'm ...

2010-02-26T13:04:08.186-08:00

The results are very interesting : )

And I'm about halfway through my first reading ... loving it : )

What a great hands on test sample of revision. I ...

2010-02-26T12:21:55.121-08:00

What a great hands on test sample of revision. I love the break down of what works and why. Isn't it interesting how we learn so much over the years (yes, years) of our writing experiences?

Thanks for sharing this process.

Interesting test. It's nice to see how others ...

2010-02-26T11:59:51.095-08:00

Interesting test. It's nice to see how others revise. I've learned a lot from the revision process! Thanks for sharing ;o)