tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post1741057378570646021..comments2023-07-23T02:07:51.261-07:00Comments on Dawn's Rise: Friday Flash Fiction – The TrainAndrew Rosenberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-78903566044697592542010-04-10T06:17:33.405-07:002010-04-10T06:17:33.405-07:00Really engrossing... great timing.. and wow, what ...Really engrossing... great timing.. and wow, what a twist at the end!<br />Nasty way to die, though... ew<br />Great stuff! Thanks!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-40770224727984499682010-04-09T17:04:02.720-07:002010-04-09T17:04:02.720-07:00@DH: I sid submit it to another place...crossing f...@DH: I sid submit it to another place...crossing fingers...<br /><br />@Marisa: He probably WAS no good. :) But justice is served all around.<br /><br />@Lady: Thanks!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-39897307141107672942010-04-09T16:53:06.349-07:002010-04-09T16:53:06.349-07:00Ah, what a fun twist at the end!Ah, what a fun twist at the end!Michelle D. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09696465137285587646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-83218571942249976852010-04-09T16:30:28.092-07:002010-04-09T16:30:28.092-07:00Ah, the trials and tribulations of mothers and dau...Ah, the trials and tribulations of mothers and daughters!<br /><br />What IF the husband was a no good...<br /><br />Well, anyway, this was a very good hold-one's-breath story with a great twist.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-57855070573778256652010-04-09T12:29:34.126-07:002010-04-09T12:29:34.126-07:00Very nice. You should submit that to The Smoking ...Very nice. You should submit that to The Smoking Poet. Its the right length, and very interesting read.<br /><br />.........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-81176592577488965792010-04-09T11:57:41.747-07:002010-04-09T11:57:41.747-07:00@Peidmont Thanks!
I just realized I wrote a Flash...@Peidmont Thanks!<br /><br />I just realized I wrote a Flash Fiction about a Bad Girl...actually two when you think about it...but it's not my Bad Girl Blogfest entry! Promise!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-62944772727485846582010-04-09T11:49:30.655-07:002010-04-09T11:49:30.655-07:00Wow, creepy. But great use of tension! Nice Andr...Wow, creepy. But great use of tension! Nice Andrew. Really nice.Anne Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05816355522284492131noreply@blogger.com