<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post1300811802616724546..comments</id><updated>2010-01-14T08:23:39.841-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Comments on The WriteRunner: Story Structure Part XII: Return With The Elixir</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/feeds/1300811802616724546/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html'/><author><name>Iapetus999</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447</uri><email>Iapetus999@gmail.com</email></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>6</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-4862530729364771812</id><published>2010-01-14T08:23:39.841-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-14T08:23:39.841-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I love that line where you say endings don't have ...</title><content type='html'>I love that line where you say endings don&amp;#39;t have to be happy, just conclusive. SO TRUE!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/4862530729364771812'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/4862530729364771812'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263486219841#c4862530729364771812' title=''/><author><name>Elana Johnson</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='04389426429613268755'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-657928921014277519</id><published>2010-01-13T22:00:40.706-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-13T22:00:40.706-08:00</updated><title type='text'>@Laura: Hopefully Monday
@Cat: I sometimes allow t...</title><content type='html'>@Laura: Hopefully Monday&lt;br /&gt;@Cat: I sometimes allow the sequel thing if it&amp;#39;s Book 2 of a trilogy...those traditionally leave a lot hanging for some reason.&lt;br /&gt;@Tara: The elixir = why you wrote the book :)&lt;br /&gt;@Erica: I slept OK after PA but Avatar kept me up all night. I kept dreaming I was on Pandora. Have you seen the news reports about the &amp;quot;Avatar Blues&amp;quot;? I can relate.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/657928921014277519'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/657928921014277519'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263448840706#c657928921014277519' title=''/><author><name>Iapetus999</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='07216385447942131026'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-4108273304273771718</id><published>2010-01-13T21:48:09.796-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-13T21:48:09.796-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Great post. 

Paranormal Activity had me up for tw...</title><content type='html'>Great post. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Paranormal Activity had me up for two days! I think this is the part I have the most trouble with, the end.I agree they don&amp;#39;t have to be happy, they just have to be.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;:o)</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/4108273304273771718'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/4108273304273771718'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263448089796#c4108273304273771718' title=''/><author><name>Erica</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/14773306703153110737</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='01932698118851581018'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-7708684805289050318</id><published>2010-01-12T18:29:55.507-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-12T18:29:55.507-08:00</updated><title type='text'>This has been a wonderful series. I'll have to giv...</title><content type='html'>This has been a wonderful series. I&amp;#39;ll have to give some thought to my elixir. I know it, and now I just have to make sure the reader will, too.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/7708684805289050318'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/7708684805289050318'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263349795507#c7708684805289050318' title=''/><author><name>Tara McClendon</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/07246124060126729229</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='17534832972195752228'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-65440433691702303</id><published>2010-01-12T16:20:04.108-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-12T16:20:04.108-08:00</updated><title type='text'>The end of a good book always leaves me wanting mo...</title><content type='html'>The end of a good book always leaves me wanting more.  Usually in the way of characters whom I&amp;#39;ve fallen in love with.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I despise endings that leave everything to the sequel or, converserly, tie everything up so tight I can&amp;#39;t envision a life beyond the last word.  Both are disappointments.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/65440433691702303'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/65440433691702303'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263342004108#c65440433691702303' title=''/><author><name>catwoods</name><uri>http://catwoods.wordpress.com/</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1447628545434926806</id><published>2010-01-11T15:12:28.291-08:00</published><updated>2010-01-11T15:12:28.291-08:00</updated><title type='text'>I'm rubbing my hands together for the next install...</title><content type='html'>I&amp;#39;m rubbing my hands together for the next installment!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/1447628545434926806'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/1300811802616724546/comments/default/1447628545434926806'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html?showComment=1263251548291#c1447628545434926806' title=''/><author><name>Laura Eno</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='06393073966760238409'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/01/story-structure-part-xii-return-with.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1300811802616724546' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5042906897152963913/posts/default/1300811802616724546' type='text/html'/></entry></feed>