tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post1060466592617213660..comments2010-02-03T21:50:37.714-08:00Andrew Rosenberghttps://profiles.google.com/100329816310941457945noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-54751524837353146362010-02-03T21:50:37.714-08:002010-02-03T21:50:37.714-08:00Very intense! I was on the edge of my seat. You have great voice, and the dialogue was brilliant. An exciting rush.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />.......dholeDonna Holehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-75917453678780340712010-02-02T23:05:50.726-08:002010-02-02T23:05:50.726-08:00To see a mechohorse, check <a href="http://blog.dawnsrise.com/2010/02/real-mechohorse.html" rel="nofollow">this post</a>.<br /><br />Thanks for the comments! Glad you enjoyed it!Iapetus999http://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-89499789563421168182010-02-02T22:57:51.815-08:002010-02-02T22:57:51.815-08:00I meant scene instead of seen. Sorry about that.Ryanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11709819500632207934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-30819846795946538082010-02-02T22:57:10.740-08:002010-02-02T22:57:10.740-08:00I really enjoyed this, and the only thing that bugged me was not being able to see what the mechohorses looked like. But, where the seen was taken out of context I&#39;m sure its not a problem at all. Very good.Ryanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11709819500632207934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-27936042178925641622010-02-02T13:13:21.394-08:002010-02-02T13:13:21.394-08:00Very action filled, edge of seat type scene. Terrific!Lisa_Gibsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17238496789960349077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-1920154583250651862010-02-02T11:57:01.829-08:002010-02-02T11:57:01.829-08:00Wow--this is loaded with powerful imagery and tension! Well done.<br /><br />I def need to practice these types of scenes. :-)Angelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01808259088625142389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5042906897152963913.post-31531224830397878452010-02-02T10:38:01.652-08:002010-02-02T10:38:01.652-08:00Wow! Such a tense, evocative mood in this--great atmosphere. I felt on edge reading it. I could practically smell the smoke. Well done, Andrew.Carolina Valdez Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.com